Friday, October 11, 2013

OctPoWriMo Day 11 prompt: The Sounds Around You

Today's prompt involves using sound as inspiration. Sound is so evocative of feeling! I love this prompt and hope I can do it justice.

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Home Song

The tap tap 
tap
of rain 
on the roof.

The gurgling of rain
in the gutter, 
singing me
to sleep.

The quiet ticking
of a clock, and
the low hum of 
the refrigerator. 

These are the sounds
the house makes,
which most of the time
I'm too busy to hear.

But when I do,
it's magic. It's home.

2 comments:

  1. I love the sound of rain lulling me to sleep. Definitely a sound of home. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. Such a peaceful mood emerges from this poem. I like the juxtaposition of those natural sounds (gurgling rain down the gutters) to that hum of the refrigerator. I also like that the process of writing this poem brought these sounds 'alive'.

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