Sunday, October 13, 2013

OctPoWriMo Day 13 prompt: Random Words Playing onto the Page

What a fabulous prompt!! I seriously adore these word puzzles, so I couldn't possibly resist this one, even though I had to drag myself out of my sick bed to write.

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Gee

Great green grass!
I gasp, seeing
that each blade
is a giant, if
you are an ant.

Imagine the glee
of grape glitter!
I gush, as I grab
gobs of it.

I'm gobsmacked
by its ginormous,
gentle beauty.

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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 13, 2013 at 3:29 PM

    love it! I adore the word gobsmacked. :)

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    1. ChristineOctober 13, 2013 at 3:53 PM

      Thanks! So do I, so I had to get that in there somehow. Actually, I'd already picked the letter G, so it fit in perfectly.

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  2. Ron PotterOctober 13, 2013 at 3:59 PM

    It's the point of view of the ant or the little guys with so much enthusiasm and joy, like a child's voice. Enjoyed to the full, thanks.

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    1. ChristineOctober 13, 2013 at 4:55 PM

      You're welcome! It's always interesting to see what others are taking away from what I come up with. Thanks for stopping by!

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  3. UnknownOctober 16, 2013 at 4:08 PM

    Gobsmacked... love that word. One of my all time favorites and almost jealous that you found a cool way to use it in poetry!

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    1. ChristineOctober 16, 2013 at 4:12 PM

      Isn't it a cool word?? I love it too, so of course I used it! :-)

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